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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:33:00 AM
    you set the scene well in this piece...I felt as though I was there watching and listening with you....mighty fine write :)

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:30:00 AM
    Well u rock as a poet here with yor awesome epic narrative dat kept me hookd to d end, wow! U came too early to d show but it swelld up n u wrote a swell one on it.. All d world's a stage n we d actors,quote. wil. Shkspear.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Well Thomas, it was a nice show... Quite enjoyable:-) very captivating, I live within the audience.... roaring it UP! such performance ((in the poem)) deserves an ovation... clap clap.. stomp stomp... you are like a song of singing the perfect colors for the eyes to read.... . thank you ..LINDA

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 12:54:00 AM
    wonderful , you are still writing as beautiful as ever !

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:29:00 PM
    Methinks you are a talent agent in this well crafted description of the rock Den!! COOL.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:38:00 PM
    You don't need those eighteen year old girls Thomas, you've got us, but this is great! Love Bev

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/19/2013 11:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not yet.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 2:04:00 PM
    A masterpiece! Excellent. Disappointed I couldn't rate it more than a 7, Thomas. Next best I could do was add it as a fav :). I can't help but ask: Are you also a musician, perchance?

    Wattle Avatar Miss Wattle
    Date: 10/19/2013 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your response to Gail now explains your understanding of the terminology :). No prob re your singing, I was hoping I could sing and you could strum - although not necessarily in the shower :) . Thanks again for visiting my page, Thomas, always a pleasure to see you.
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 10:31:00 PM
    A very descriptive write Thomas, music can be such amazing therapy, Glad you have discovered such talent, enjoyed xxx

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 2:44:00 AM
    - Thomas .... 100% back to the soup family .... - A poem / story that rock!! - Thank you for the experience - enjoyable reading material. - Have a nice day - The sun shines , beautiful autumn colors .... but cold in Norway. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:44:00 PM
    Hi Thom This is creative and unique. A brilliant write. You pull the reader in with the imagery and story line They are enchanted till the very end. But we need to make it all country music. LOL Nice job my friend

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:09:00 PM
    This sounds like a place I would want to hang out in. I love to listen to many varieties of music. Your work is so vivid, it feels like I am right in the scene when I am reading! Is this for the "Groove It" contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the comments on my poem, "Electricity". I am so glad that you got it! :)