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With you in autumn evening

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With you in autumn evening

The sweet songs of birds, We hand in hand across the lawn, Pansies white yellow and violet Tossing their heads in the breeze. Somewhere the sound of falling leaves. The sound of squirrel cracking the walnut. Calm weather warm sun, White fluffy clouds forming different shapes, A passenger flight in the blue sky, Sun born in the horizon and about to fade in the horizon, Both our heartbeats echo inside of chest, Shutting and opening of our lips, Your unkempt hair flying backwards, Yellowish west sky. Heart shaped fig leaf's shadow. If I could stop this world from spinning, I would do so, Just to be with you In this autumn evening.

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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:16:00 PM
    this is the most beautiful poem of yours that I think I have ever read. A FAVE

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 11/16/2013 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate it, thanks for liking.
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:26:00 AM
    you make my heart sway with your dance of autumn gliding ever so softly, kiran..:) huggs

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/20/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you make my heart sway with your comment.. thank you nette.
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:43:00 AM
    This is some really, really great imagery! Good stuff!

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/20/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Emmie.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:58:00 AM
    The images in this poem are amazing! And the ending is superb!

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/18/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Monterey for liking and commenting
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 4:04:00 AM
    - Oh ... a beautiful poem .... like it very much, Kiran. :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/17/2013 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anne.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 2:59:00 AM
    Nice romantic expressions of emotions of love, Kiran

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/17/2013 3:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Dr. Ram