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To My Demise

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Below is the poem entitled To My Demise which was written by poet Ajalon Michael Zarate. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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To My Demise


While you mentioned you're confused
I had to take a minute and put myself in your shoes.
Began thinking in twos
Rather than always thinking about the only one I choose!
Realizing, how much I've abused
Your kindness I took for granted and misused.
Wondering what's my excuse
Unable to comprehend...Leaving the heart you've lend in the end to be so bruised.
Just to turn around to apologize
But you and I know that I can't turn back the time.
Silly me to even think that through my rhyme
That I can actually change your mind with these simple lines.
What use to symbolize
Our trust are now broken by these silly lies
Am I surprise?
To my demise...There should be no reason why we often act so uncivilized!
Until the cries
Began to fill the empty space that washed away her smile.
Washed away for miles
Leaving her in pain that would stretch so far out like the River Nile!

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
    For this I have no words. You laid it all out on the line and I hope she gets it. This would have any woman in tears as I felt all the emotions in which this was written. Thank you Thank you Thank you

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:21:00 PM
    I can feel all the emotions here. so intense!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Ajalon, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Ajalon, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 10:06:00 AM
    My heart ached when I read this Ajalon; it is a permanent scar, the one you speak of. Wonderful job to draw this emotion out, as it is an old one. Beautiful writing.

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 11:27:00 AM
    Ajalon, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

    Zarate Avatar Ajalon Michael Zarate
    Date: 10/17/2013 3:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat...Looking forward to reading some your peice!
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:08:00 AM
    - Welcome to P-Soup,Ajalon Michael! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    Zarate Avatar Ajalon Michael Zarate
    Date: 10/17/2013 3:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Anne...I hope it wont be the 1st and my last!
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:24:00 AM
    Michael, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    Zarate Avatar Ajalon Michael Zarate
    Date: 10/17/2013 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda...I will definite give it a shot!