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Old Age

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Old Age

Thumbnails of memories we rewind.

Reel of real life has come to halt.

The old age is the time for

Shaking hands, blurring eyes

To share one's know-hows

And prepare for

Soul's transmute

From the 

Chest.

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:49:00 AM

    I've never attempted a nonet... I'm afraid now I couldn't come close to this one .... well done.... Jake

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 11/16/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks and ya you try this from it's funny.
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:31:00 PM

    Kiran, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/23/2013 9:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks SKAT for reading.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Kiran, . CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/23/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Linda!
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:24:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning nonet, Kiran! Love and blessings, Rhonda

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/23/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rhonda.
  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:57:00 AM

    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/20/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for that Sara.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on a great Nonet and win. Love, Joyce

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/20/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Joyce.
  1. Date: 10/19/2013 1:44:00 AM

    very nicely done. BIG congrats for your win.

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/20/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    a BIG thanks to you Andrea.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 5:22:00 AM

    Thanks for the entry, Kiran

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa Date: 10/20/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    my pleasure.