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Atlantic sea dogs

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Below is the poem entitled Atlantic sea dogs which was written by poet Danesh Morgan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Atlantic sea dogs

Mommy my dearest,
Walking on the plank,
Sharks circle nearest,
Pirates shout their chants.

Watched by the eldest,
Eyes drawing blank.
Cries from the youngest,
As she hits the bank.

Laughters fill the deck, 
But not from the pirates,
Confusion hit the pack,
A shift in the climax.

Crews became silent,
Skies Turn  to darkness,
A deadly sign sent,
Appearance Sea goddess.

Knees hit the floor,
Proud men into cowards,
Now to even the score,
See the Sea dogs cowed. 

Mommy brought her pets,
Krakens and the killer whales,
Got their briggas wet, 
Frighten whore males.

Our colour changed, 
Beige to deep blue,
Cause great derange,
Retribution is upon you.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2014 4:31:00 PM
    I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!

  1. Date: 6/25/2014 2:01:00 PM
    uniquely quilled with a surreal tone, danesh.. sweet congrats!.. huggs

    Morgan Avatar Danesh Morgan
    Date: 6/30/2014 1:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    my sincere thanks