Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

The Sadness In My Soul

Lucilla Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Sadness In My Soul which was written by poet Lucilla Carrillo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Lucilla Carrillo

Best Lucilla Carrillo Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Sadness In My Soul

The Sadness in my Soul At first it was joy, many hugs and kisses we gave eachother. Life was smiling at us. We went to many places, you and I. We never had fights, or big time arguments. We just lived happy, back in those days. The years passed and we were still together. I thought that nothing could cloud our happiness. Destiny has a date to keep. One day God called you and you went with Him. I was left alone - not knowing what to do. Now I sit here remembering the past, looking at old pictures. The sadness in my soul is - looking at those pictures and knowing that you are not here anymore...
10/15/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 4:34:00 PM
    A beautiful and sad poem you have penned here Lucilla, At seventy one years old. loved ones have been dying on me one after another. The sadness of these losses are very great. so I can deeply relate to you. Won't be too long before I am joining them I suppose. I guess that's life....peter

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Lucilla, I can feel your grief. It is a terrible void that replaces the spot in a heart that has lost someone special. I wrote one some time ago that expresses it a little differently. "More Than A Memory" can be found in my portfolio.... Thanks for your sweet comments on my poem, "Like No One Else Before." Love ya dearly.... Jake

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Awesome write, I believe they never leave us/ or they give us signs, such as a few days ago my b-day balloons were on the floor. I came back into my b-room. They were on my bed. My mom face came into view ;} She's been on the other side since 1995. I BELIEVE, thank you for reading my Change of Season ;}

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Ahhh... But I believe his heart is still there with you... Touching dedication.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 1:23:00 AM
    I like!!!! "IF YOU REALLY LOVE THIS PERESON,BRING THIS PERSON BACK IN YOUR LIFE.......

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:36:00 PM
    Very beautiful but sad poem. I'm so glad you have the happy memories. Keep them alive.

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 10:00:00 PM
    Hola Lucilla, Just stopped by to see if you had a new one..Glad I did..Nice one.. Respecto, Ken

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:21:00 PM
    Hi lucilla....thinking of you tonight....this is very emotional I know...touched me lot....your loved one is close.....God bless

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 6:24:00 PM
    the title is perfect for this one. but you have great faith and you be with him again!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 4:00:00 PM
    this is truly sad, and the power you emit with your wonderful words are so sincere, so tender,, lovely poetry....

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry - sometimes I can't think of nothing to write, but looking at old pictures inspired me. I'm glad that you like it.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 1:03:00 PM
    heartfelt in such beautiful words top shelf in my books

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Liam.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 12:50:00 PM
    The loss of loved ones is very hard indeed. You may feel that a part of you has been taken with them... And that's the love that you shared. Try not to look back, and keep looking forward! For that is what your loved one would want. Not for you to remain forever unhappy. You will meet again... Keep looking forward to that day. We all have a time and place... Don't waste the time you've been given. I hope this doesn't sound to harsh? That is not my intention. Just trying to cheer you up. :o)

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 12:09:00 PM
    Very sad but reality is behind it. Very nicely expressed, my friend. Loved always, bl

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Bi, you are so sweet.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:57:00 AM
    A big hug & respect to you for this.

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake, this means a lot.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:54:00 AM
    passing on of loved ones can be filled with angst.. you expressed this in a most profound way, lucy... a beautiful melody!..:) huggs

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Nette
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:26:00 AM
    An emotional poem, Lucia. Thanks for writing from your heart..JM

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so welcome.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:46:00 AM
    I can feel the pain of loss in these lines..I hope that the loss to death was not a recent happening..I know that must be a really hard part of life to lose someone so close..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara, it will 4 years next month.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:27:00 AM
    This is a truly sad write but also a very well written and heartfelt poem! I could feel your pain within this piece as it touched me deeply my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! What an amazing verse, Great Work!!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell - you are always so kind.
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:25:00 AM
    Ohhh I feel your pain and sadness! I lost my first wife 14 years ago and a tear forms still when I think of what we had! A sad but beautiful write... love, Jack xox

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack . It's been 4 years, but it still hurts. My husband ws a good man up until the end. We only miss them when they are good to us...
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:32:00 AM
    My dearest, Lucy, I wish no-one to be in your position! In the position to lose the most beloved person someone may have! For more than thirty years I am consoling people that have lost love ones and it is so hard, especially with mothers. My poem "THE CROSSING" is an effort to alleviate some of the pain! God bless you. Your poem is excellent for it is true and sincere, real and beautiful, for that alone a 7!

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 10/16/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you your comment means so much to me.
Next>|Last