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A poem in conception

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A poem in conception

A 
Poem 
Sleeps in me
With high traffic
And I search for nouns, verbs and images.

Breathe in her mouth, speak in ears, touch lips
To mould her shape,
Feel and hear
In my
Heart.

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Dt. 16-10-13
5th place win
Dr. Ram mehta
I read three of your poems namely Poetry by candlelight your first on the soup,The Poet and
The poet named Dan and above poem is the result

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:29:00 PM
    nice win Dr... Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:01:00 PM
    Clever description of a poem's conception.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:31:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 1:29:00 PM
    wow! This is one that should be printed !congratulations deserved win!

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:08:00 PM
    congratulations Dr Ram... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Lovely poem about Dan, Dr. Ram and many congrats on your placement in the contest. Your P-Soup Friend, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:46:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in Dan Kearley contest - Nice to read your words about a common friend, Dr.Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:26:00 AM
    I learn from your wisdom! Your poems indeed have life! One of the few poems I have posted to date "Angry Words" was inspired be a dear friend who gets so frustrated when the words don't come or are not the masterpiece that was envisioned. Creating something beautiful should bring some satisfaction.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:44:00 AM
    You captivated me with this meaningful delight. I agree, the end result comes from the loving relationship within. Awesome :)

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Great write Dr. I at times feel the same- a poem takes an amorphous shape in my mind which unless attended to disappears. What makes poets unique is that they don't ignore this conception. They blow life into it, give it form and share with others. This is amazing DR. MEHTA. JM

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Yes, Dr Ram, the poem sleeps in us waiting to wake it from its slumber! Marvelous!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:23:00 PM
    "A poem sleeps in me..." I loved your opening, Dr. Mehta. This is a very nice piece :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:43:00 PM
    this one is very nice!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:41:00 PM
    this is truly a remarkable poem, Dr,

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this passionate work today..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Lovely expression my friend with nice conception. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:25:00 AM
    This is really lovely. It's great that you were able to capture this moment in a complete form!!!