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Beatle Mania

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Beatle Mania

Shotgun in a ‘56 Chevy
White with baby blue trim
Three-speed on the column
Cruising out of El Paso town 
Headed to the City of Angels
The sun is coming up
Static, crackling AM station
Day Tripper on the radio...


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  1. Date: 11/20/2013 12:11:00 PM

    Ah, To be there once more Tim!! Congrats!

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 6:46:00 AM

    Congrats on your win. Well deserved

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:58:00 PM

    nice scene you set up...you take us there and leave us with the song playing in our heads...good poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Tim, , Congratulations on your win. Awesome Beatle Mania Poem.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Congratulations, Tim. Succinctly done!

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 11:43:00 AM

    big congratulations on your win Tim xx

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 10:41:00 AM

    - Beatles will never die! - Think I could the text on almost all the songs. - "Happy Times"! - A contest that was fun to take part in! - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, TIM !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 10:33:00 AM

    You took us for a ride! I loved this !!! Well done!

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Tim---I love the Beatles and I love this poem....I wish you all the best in the contest my friend! Enjoy your day, Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 6:16:00 PM

    This is a nice reflective one, Tim. It could have been made into a tanka too!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Any contest about music.......and I see you as a winner !!! Oh I love this one......(by the way......my first car was a '56 Chevy....!! My dad was in the auto-shop business......he found this old Chevy for me, fixed it up and painted it in his shop....it was yellow and white.....and Looked like I was driving a taxi-cab...lol !! My girlfriends loved it!!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 7:51:00 AM

    Tim you captured that moment with just a feel lines.. Thanks for taking me with you on this journey.. perfect ride :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 8:36:00 PM

    love this, tim! i feel like i'm in that car with you...dum - da - da - da - da - da- da - da - da- da- da- day tripper - yeah!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:23:00 PM

    Tim - Oh those days on the teenager roads. lvoe, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 8:01:00 AM

    With just a few lines you captured the sounds and feelings of a precious moment in time. Well done!

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 5:39:00 AM

    It would have been nice to have been on that ride, Tim! :) I love LONG rides...City of the Angels...yea, been there! :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:50:00 AM

    - Beautiful memories of sweet times.... .close to my heart, Tim. - Luck in contest!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)