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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:01:00 PM

    I agree with Mystic Rose. I like seeing the whole thing all together. Love how two of your haiku rhymed, with brass!! If I got your meaning right in this set, this is a good theme to write about.

    Britt Avatar Christopher Thor Britt Date: 10/23/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 2:42:00 PM

    I like this long version better, it appeals to the prayer warrior, well done Christopher xxx

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Stunning!!!!!!! Such wisdom here, most traps and cages are ultimately of our own making. Loved it.

    Britt Avatar Christopher Thor Britt Date: 10/15/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your amazing feedback.