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Loni-lesson mine

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Loni-lesson mine

yet we exist and do our time, no matter what was the bloody crime, before we came into this world, soon after we were bloody hurled, down the birth canal of rhyme, be a better man they chime, your fate remains unfurled, until your end of time, 7th level so sublime. Don re: Dr Ram " Faces of Loneliness"

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  1. Date: 10/18/2013 3:18:00 PM

    This piece showed a great strength of words... Great symbolism and choice of words.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:25:00 AM

    excellent theme, and poetry, comes home to the reader does this,,, like it...

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:28:00 AM

    Don, a very nice piece of work about life's long journey whether rough or smooth, nice to read your work again my friend, hope you are well....David