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A CAPTURED BEAUTY

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A CAPTURED BEAUTY


bruised from a snow- capped flesh earth is growing numb without rest, threadbare plants gasp; existence bites the nodes of winter’s skin turned every which way, bends droop like deep chambers upon chilled meadow striking flint, just a bit, a spark that wants to sip a flower moist, till darkness swallows the pistils hush…wait when springtime ushers a roulette of buds dyed stark yellow pouring dew from a cycle reborn to seize her unmentionable thrill of being once here, crowned hillsides glitter igniting stars to touch the moon, clouds dripping of raindrops’ spray pitter patter; the gentle streams flow while from the river, luster pours down through an ocean igniting April’s two hands... one waking the flame of petals’ limbs, the other cuddling grace of season past a mixture of spring… wild and tender. ------------- collaboration of nette onclaud and liam mcdaid *thank you for the wonder that is you!

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Excellent collaboration!!! I like it.. very creative..two thumbs up! thanks for sharing. have a nice day. ;)

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 2:58:00 PM
    very enjoyable a great write you 2 hope to see more from you Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Congratulations to both, on a great collab. Beautiful poem, attractively synthesized and well attended. Thank you for it. G.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Great mix..Enjoyed reading this one today.I especially liked the last stanza..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:59:00 PM
    awesome collaboration. Love this one. I remembered the poem you spoke of about the rabbit. Wrestling Rabbits and Dreams. It is such an old one now, that when I took down my poetry last time, i never reposted it. But I am so happy you enjoyed that one. It is one of my favs of my own. It was such a pleasure speaking with you again on drake's show, Nette. I hope we can do that again. love and hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:33:00 PM
    Great collaboration. Very beautifully imaged and exceptional last stanza :)

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Conjoined minds? Breathtaking beauty seen in these words. Forgive me for not saying, thank you first! Teamwork makes the dream work... It was a pleasure hearing you today, Nette. Thanks for your support!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:22:00 PM
    A seamless and beautiful flow!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:14:00 PM
    A wonderful collab write by you two.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Nette it is a long time since I read your work and even though this is a collab, it is stunningly beautiful, it flows seamlessly through each stanza and the words are very well chosen, a great job well done....David

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:37:00 PM
    Nette; I can capture the beauty of this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:07:00 PM
    You two have expertly written a masterful write here my friend! Nette you already can put together the greatest of poems but when you put Liam into the mix you both excel tremendously! I love your collaboration! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Nice collaboration indeed, difficult to say who wrote what even from the language point of view, nette

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:48:00 PM
    'good heavens. you guys did a FANTASTIC job. It is kind of erotic too. VERY nicely done. I can't even tell which one of you was writing what!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:46:00 PM
    this is excellent poetry you two,, just love the collab...

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:38:00 PM
    - A really good collaboration in a beautiful poem. - (Good luck on the radio, Nette) - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)