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The Winter of My Tears

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The Winter of My Tears

"Alas! The lessening light, the worsening my plight- My face- a somber expression..." excerpt from *a poem by Just That Archaic Poet The summer of my laughter’s passed; my happy skies grow overcast. No meadowlark is singing here. The winter of my tears is near. In vale of shadows, sun hangs low. I sojourn now where chill winds blow. Into November’s gloom I peer. The winter of my tears is near. Before I meet eternity, a snow shall come and bury me, Its brilliance - anguish soon will mirror. The winter of my tears is near. The summer of my laughter’s passed. The winter of my tears is near. *Poem interpreted: "Equinox" This is technically a kyrielle sonnet for the Reinvent, Reimagine, Revamp! Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 11/18/2013 4:19:00 PM

    Very lovely and brave, you are singing with courage in this one Andrea, very nice.

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 3:24:00 PM

    I love this poem, Andrea, the imagery is amazing. I can feel the deep emotions and the cold of loneliness. An excellent entry for this contest! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much! :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:15:00 PM

    this was a very creative and excellent poem Andrea....one of my favorites in the contest...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Love the imagery. Poetic brilliance. Keep writing; love your work. Makes me want to write again. Sherese

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:21:00 PM

    Hi Andrea, this is a striking revamp. So well crafted and imaged. I am humbled to be placed in a contest with you. Congrats on your well deserved win :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Loved this one, Andrea and liked the "winter of my tears" idea! You are very talented and congrats on your win in the contest! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:07:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations, you are a gifted poet.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 6:43:00 AM

    Love your kyrielle and interpretation AD--many well deserved kudos !

  1. Date: 11/10/2013 12:29:00 PM

    andrea, good luck in the contest. This is awesome :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Love this sweet poem Andrea. It has such a sad ring to it. Snow is melting today so roads should be nice and slippery tonight. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:15:00 PM

    the phone went and I was logged out by the time I got to leave this comment, lol - another beauty here, my friend

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 7:41:00 AM

    what a beautiful poem you have penned...love everything about this one...he will love it for sure! hugs :) soupmail

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:26:00 AM

    Excellent, Andrea! I love what you drew out of his lines, and created from it, Wow, I'm amazed at your ability to do that! and it's beautiful too, of course! Great job :)

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 2:06:00 PM

    Lovely work of art Andrea. Thoroughly enjoyed how your wonderful mind works. I'm free so I will be stopping by to catch up on some of your gems.

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 8:16:00 PM

    Ditto ditto and this is gorgeous...another one that sings Andrea.....lovely.....

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 2:44:00 PM

    Lovely piece Andea, I enjoyed reading it. Tears are like rain and after rain we get a rainbow to tell us all is well. God Bless. Dave.

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Ahh the Winter of those tears how sad yet beautifully expressed..The summer of our laughter..yep quick...so quick it passed.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 10:23:00 AM

    What is called nice, you have done well that. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 5:34:00 PM

    Great write here Andrea. could easily be a winner, well done...peter

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 10:35:00 AM

    'eternity' is a perfect little addition to this superb piece, andie.. it takes my mind to a winter somber yet laced with hearfelt imagery that lasts!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Lovely, Andrea...very beautifully penned

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:27:00 AM

    This is gorgeous!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:49:00 AM

    Excellent write, Andrea!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:02:00 AM

    Excellent. Sad but beautifully written. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Loved it! You amaze me with your talent for taking the forms of poetry and making them burst with beauty and life until they are anything but formal.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2013 7:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    what a nice thing to say, Monterey
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 3:16:00 AM

    Hi Andrea great write hope you don't shed many tears, loved this my friend, all the best poetowen

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:19:00 AM

    Love your interpretation Andrea, beautifully done =)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:16:00 PM

    Andera; this is sad, but very beautiful The winter of my tears is near. Great work and good luck in the contest... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:36:00 PM

    Hello Andrea...Left you message under my latest write..By the way Frost? Never...For me Kurt V. Understand your pet peeve but Poetry Soup has no restrictions on # of poems per day..So obviously some people write more than others...Makes them feel good..So be it!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:36:00 PM

    You did most wonderfully with this rare form! You have done very well with this form! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent piece, this evening! This is a masterful write my friend! What a remarkable poem, Great Work!!

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