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HOPE

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HOPE

Young girls
pluck their eyebrows
paint on new faces
practice walking in heels
swirl the hems of their dresses
Slender willows leaning
into the tentative breeze
waiting to be asked to dance

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  1. Date: 4/27/2014 5:09:00 PM
    Good, petite poem. :) I rate it a 6 out of 7. You did a good job. Keep writing!! -DWB

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 12:09:00 AM
    Monterey, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Hello Sweetie, Just a lovely piece and the metaphor's flow nicely within this magical write. Wonderful expression here... As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:47:00 AM
    A wonderful write! You described the youthful heart perfectly...love this! Thanks for your comments on my page...Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:13:00 AM
    Smiles pro-active and beautiful And here is one for you my friend, Talk soon, xxx Vie xxx

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 9:09:00 AM
    I wrote one inspired by this gem.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:54:00 AM
    This one makes me smile!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 6:27:00 PM
    This poem warmed me,Thanks. Thank you for reading my work

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Beautifully written, Monterey, I enjoyed this poem....peter

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
    A lovely piece, Monterey!

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:34:00 AM
    ...... feels like 100 years ago .... lol. - Sweet poem Monterey ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 6:47:00 PM
    This is so cute........young girls do all those things, yes........and they are the ones who are naturally beautiful !! Sweet poem!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Didn't I fave this one?? I need to!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:30:00 PM
    I once used to... Laughing at sweet memories! Thanks for sharing, dear Monterey! It's really a great write! love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:02:00 AM
    OH MY, this is so beautiful. How I love when you write like this, dear lady!!