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I Walk Alone - 1 year remake

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I Walk Alone - 1 year remake

Here as I wander
Down the empty path of life
I desire all that I can not have
I desire nothing at all

Here as I wander
I peer into houses I pass
You are all by the fireplace
Warmed by the comfort of those you love

Here as I wander
Down empty streets
I am bitten by the cold of night
I walk alone, a graveyard off in the distance

The raven circles
A full moon exposed between the clouded mists
I am enticed by the eerily silence of death
I now walk with vigor, I see where I belong

I kiss the earth of my new home
Now I may finally repose
Torments freed, savor the black rose
I lie upon the cold slab


I rest in peace

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Stone cold write, empty as a tomb thats been forgotten about, a life not remembered. I can picture a grave with a small marker just a simple name and date, covered in fall leaves, well done. I liked it for it's coldness, bravo. also thank you for your comments on my work.

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 10/20/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Cherl, appreciate your lovely comments!!
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:09:00 AM
    There's a little buddy that needs you!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:18:00 PM
    This is really good, but I don't think you are ready to go yet. It is not your time. Smile and say to yourself - life is good. Don't walk alone..... Lucilla

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 10/20/2013 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Lucila, kind words as always!!!
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 11:36:00 AM
    My Arthur this is chilling! You should enter this one into Russell's Haloween contest.

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 2:08:00 AM
    Arthur this is an excellent journey full of so many images of life, full of sadness and love, very well written my friend...David

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 10/20/2013 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David, nice to see you, hope all is well with you!
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 11:50:00 PM
    Oh....very melancholic, my dear....May this be far from you. Very deep and powerful message...Hugs....Thanks for visiiting the same poem twice....how lovely!!!!!!

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 10/28/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Three times is a charm!!!