Below is the poem entitled IODIZED GAZES which was written by poet
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Jammed like rows of canned fish
strangers acting strange
on a 6 o’clock bullet train…
labeled as hats or ticket stubs
coughing on dry throats wet
from air-tight decks…
I wonder in curiosity
how skins touching each other’s loneliness
can remain on couches or hand-rests
without looking at each other’s eyes,
as if iodized by hinges
of phlegmatic gazes…alone,
with their screaming, screeching thoughts.
Inspiration from 'Tied To The Train Tacks'
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