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Rain and Ducks

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Rain and Ducks

Rain drops fall softy
each splashing drop forms circles
which join into puddles

Ducks splash with great glee
flapping wings causing droplets
that reflect rainbows

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  1. Date: 5/15/2014 9:32:00 PM
    Shadow This is so cute and sweet. Rainbows, ducks, puddles, and fun. what could be better. Thank you for the nice comment on my Garden poem.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Cute poem...loved the rain and duck theme! I could definitely picture it raining by reading your poem.....excellent job!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:21:00 PM
    IReally like seeing ducks floating along Shadow, Pleased to have read this and thanks for your visit..'

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/14/2013 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Joe an ty dear man ducks are often so funny also ty for time reading and lovely review Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 2:04:00 AM
    Shadow the link between the two haiku's are very seamless, they are very well thought out, excellent...David

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/12/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi David and Ty much appreciated Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Hi Shadow, love your beautiful words, as I love rain and ducks, I enjoyed very much....Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/12/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Peter for kind review have fun on your holiday enjoyed your poem Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 2:36:00 PM
    love these - thanks for letting me work with Russell and Andrea in your contest : )

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Jack I hope you enjoyed it I think working with another poet produces wonderful poems the standard was very high Ty for enjoying these Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 10:43:00 AM
    impressed by the continuity of this splendid 'ku with a great cut on the third line, shadow... more, more!.. :) huggs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Nette hope you have a nice weekend ty for your valued review Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 7:02:00 AM
    Ahh!! Beautiful site to see..Very descriptive work about the scene..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for dropping by..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Sara ty for stopping in and enjoying this Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 3:53:00 AM
    - So lovely images Shadow...... well written! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne Lise have you snow yet? ty for your valuable time reading and enjoying Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 12:30:00 AM
    Metaphors and similes creating a nice picture, Shadow

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra they always look so carefree ty for nice review Shadow x smile
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/11/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Dr Ram nice to see you visit glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:45:00 PM
    beautiful images....I can see the ducks swimming in the puddles... nicely penned :)