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come to paradise

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come to paradise

absolutley beautiful
striking a spark
when one soul 
shines out
radiating warmth
in the deepest
of feelings

touching without lips
seeing in sight
uttering under
the breath
blowing upon emotions
softly it lands
touching to
the very heart

one beauty
is your soul
fluttering into
the deepest ocean
washing away
all darkness
holing the eyes
of inner vision

a golden treasure
on the ground 
that you stand
i place 
all feelings
on a woolen fleece
you softly stand
tall among'st them

held in the castle
that of souls
if we come together
will be the making
that in one beauty
i found paradise

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:04:00 AM
    beautiful and fantastical.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:45:00 PM
    WOW THIS IS VERY DEEP AND BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED IT. AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY HEARTS OCEAN WRITE.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:52:00 PM
    wow, liam, i sure love the feeling, and imagery of finding paradise within another heart. beautiful........... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 3:13:00 PM
    An absolutely beautiful poem. The images conjured up are gorgeous. Best Wishes, Linda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Hi Liam, Wonderful romantic pen buddy.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Beautiful, I am sure she will gladly except your invitation Liam.