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Legend of Fred the beginning

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Legend of Fred the beginning

It was that special night…
Of fright and delight….
The kind that most children enjoy…
Where monsters and clowns sleep under the bed.
while children with their favorite toy…
pull the covers over their head..
But this one was different …
Some still can’t believe it…
But it’s up to you to decide…
The costumes were chosen, and the children quite proud….
 knew they were going to be the scariest and creepiest ones in the crowd..
The night was windy and a little bit cool….
 they all met as planned down by the school..
There was a Werewolf , a Witch, a Vampire and a Clown..
who had a smile which was turned upside down.
No one spoke, as they were all in disguise…
because that would have ruined the big surprise…
They went up to the houses yelling “ trick or treat “..
And each got something good to eat…
Oh, what a blast they had that night..
Running up and down the streets..
Filling their tummies with lots of sweets..
It was getting late and they were tired. .we should be in bed, they said..
But before we go, we need to know, which one of us is “Fred ?”
So they took off their masks…and to their surprise..
The Werewolf was Mason, the Witch was Gabby…
And the Vampire was their best friend the little blonde Abby….
Oh then you must be Fred.. ..they said to the clown..
But ...when the clown started to remove his mask…
 they discovered the truth…he wasn’t wearing one….

* watch for sequels in this series

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  1. Date: 3/24/2014 4:37:00 PM

    awesome, a cliffhanger on this one. Next time I visit you, I shall have to continue the story!!

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 11:16:00 AM

    Even though I am not a big fan of Halloween scary stuff. Its amazing how I read this poem and found so much talent and descrpive words in this poem. almost was like I was there. So given credit to where credit is due. Great work. This is how you write

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/27/2013 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jenesha..I realize my style of writing is kind of OUT there , and I appreciate when others GET IT and enjoy..thank you for the compliment.
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:29:00 AM

    KI, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/27/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda...what a great surprise on a beautiful Fall morning..yippee !
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:08:00 AM

    good one...loved the end :)

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/27/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the compliment..hope you read the rest of the series and enjoy....
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:24:00 AM

    KI, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/27/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Skat...hope you enjoy my other writes...
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:11:00 PM

    First I'd like to welcome you to the soup. I wanted to read your first poem and enjoyed it very much. I look forward to seeing more posts from you. and looking forward to reading your gator bait poems. Wishing you a happy halloween season.

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/21/2013 11:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much for the welcome and taking the time to read the first in my series of " Fred the Legend " look forward to hearing comments on my writes..
  1. Date: 10/18/2013 11:22:00 AM

    aaaaakkkkk Clowns are the scariest ! Goosebumps! excellent writing :)

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/21/2013 11:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes..I feel they are scariest because they hide behind a lack of facial expression that we can't decipher.. thanks for the compliment.
  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:34:00 PM

    A great big welcome to the Soup and a great big thank you for stopping by my page! I know you will enjoy your stay! Hugs xox

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/21/2013 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for the welcome..and you're welcome, I enjoyed your work.
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 7:20:00 PM

    KJ, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/21/2013 11:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    SKAT-LOVE...Glad you liked my poem and thanks for the compliment. Most of my poems come from real life, I just put my own " twist " on them with out of the box humour ! look forward to exchanging words with you. enjoy your day..
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:05:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup, Kj ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    force Avatar kj force Date: 10/21/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the visit and the welcome..and being my first comment greeter...
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:55:00 PM

    wow what a story, KJ, this is the perfect month to rally up such a write. .perhaps you might like my poem "forbidden" looking forward to read the sequel. Kj, I like your first poetic piece. ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@