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ON RIPPLES THAT HEAL

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ON RIPPLES THAT HEAL


With moonlight, I pace… a quiet repose
That gazing far out across a wind-tossed sea 
Ringlets of tides beckon me, quietly.
The billow of a shoreline lifts my toes 
As I in solace view the edge of bends
While current turns from curls to downtrends
To pursue a soul torn, sandblast on woes,
A throbbing the crest rinses like a salve
In rolls of tears, breaths…salty mist foregoes
My whimper exhaling on ripples that heal;
And dissolves into froth upon waves of zeal.
The burden released, heart of sea bestows
One final lap where new dewdrops spill
Beyond the high rise of seawind’s goodwill.


Heart Of The Sea Contest: Poetess Darkly

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Nette, Congrats! Top marks from me. CTB

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:30:00 PM
    Nette, congratulations, in the heart of the sea contest.............. SKAT

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:21:00 AM
    nice win...pd

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:09:00 AM
    Great rhythm and flow to this winning work..Way to go..Congrats.Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 2:00:00 AM
    A beautiful musical piece and combination of both Surreal and Lyric poetry. A well attended composition that needs to be read more than once. Carefully chosen vocabulary create rich images and concepts. Congrats on your great poem and win. :) G.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 4:46:00 PM
    a delightful beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 12:47:00 PM
    A beautiful painting Nette!

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Healing through the tides. Embracing serentiy with every formidable crash, to regain one's identity. Fantastic.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:20:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading this enlightening write this evening my friend! You have written a tremendous poem, especially with a classic line such as, "One final lap where new dewdrops spill" what a grandiose line right there Nette! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:10:00 PM
    This sounds like a rhyming sonnet Nette You are really good at this form, your words sedate soothe and calm, that and my herbal tea what else can a girl want, thank you for the beauty you possess, and so easily dis-possess from my heart to yours xxx

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 4:45:00 PM
    You got me rising with.the seawind and feeling each new drop of dew..So beautiful this is..with a sad feel yet positive ending.Excellent our dear Nettie

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:17:00 PM
    "That father gazing out across a wind-tossed sea" ..... and there you stand with the wind and salty sea smell in your hair ...... (I had to write it .... lol) - Beautiful poem, Nette! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 12:53:00 PM
    Hi Nette, Nicely written with a melodic.. flow..Thanks for visiting my verse today.. Ken