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A Blank Screen

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A Blank Screen



A blank screen is staring back at me Taunting me, laughing at what it sees A poet struggling to find the right words To express his feelings, it's totally absurd It should be a snap, words should roll out Describing what his feelings are all about About love and passion and heart felt desire Being together, experiencing love's fire It appears this love has me totally lost Realize now doesn't come without cost Nights without sleep tossing and turning Thinking of we two, oh what a yearning A beautiful story of love we're writing Never felt anything quite so exciting Where will it lead, only heaven knows I'm along for the ride, wherever it goes My life has become this magical ride Never again this love I will hide I'll shout from the rooftops loud and clear Our love will last for eternity, my dear © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:06:00 AM

    The love for my kids is DRIVING me nuts and giving me a blank screen... Paying the car insurance for two young dude has starving to get the money together... But they'd be starving if we didn't... And one broke his phone... Never knew getting a new phone could be so stressful... Our phone account was too much for them to deal with... They called every 10 minutes and finally came home to fix every thing... Which only took 10 minutes... Thank goodness Dragon doesn't know about phones yet!... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/8/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tell me about it... I know all about that stuff! Had 5 kiddles! Hang in there, dear Carol xoxox
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Your heart speaks, again, without hesitation. Blank screens will never, ever stop you. They fear you. ;-)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/8/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL Yes! I'm to be feared!!! Can't shut this damn heart up! Have a great Tuesday my good friend Drake!
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:20:00 PM

    Kenny....you are smitten!!!! Such sweet poetry is flowing from you these days....Absolutely lovely....

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am smitten with the concept of love! Isn't that the way it was supposed to be! Love is the answer no matter the question! Thank you my dearest Eileen! Until next time... love and big hugs, Kenny xoxoxox
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:34:00 AM

    a song of love and praise that makes the world go round... live , light, and love, jack.. some kind of awesome..:) huggs

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your sweet words are always appreciated my dear Nette... no different this time! Thanks! Big hugs, Jack xoxoxox
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:45:00 AM

    Indeed you did find your voice =)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Now you've gone and done it again, my friend! LOL Thanks again! Cheers Mr. Simunsen!!!
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:17:00 AM

    I give you a seven for this one. I don't think you have too much trouble finding the right words. You always say the the right things to make us feel good. God bless youand yours always.... Lucilla

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so so sweet my dear Lucilla! Thank you very much... xoxoxox
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:42:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Jack, on the excitement love brings...hugs, catie :)

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear Catie! Love your words... big hugs, Jack xoxox
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Jack, the lover of lovers, you describe the euphoria of love so well, and the eternity part, well that is every man and woman's deep desire, as for the cost, we hope the end result is eternal bliss, greetings to you my friend, from good old scarbaria, xxx

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 10/6/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey! Can you see my waving! LOL Thank my dear Miss Rose for those sweet words! Lotsa love xoxoxox