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Eyes Open and Close

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Eyes Open and Close

Your eyes open…but do they clearly see 
me?
I was driving on a real dark lane
Your eyes close…but do they clearly 
sleep?
Don’t let go of my hand…refrain 
From making me go insane

I have to grab a hold of the healing rain
I’ve decided to listen to music
I have to throw all of my worries into the 
trash bin
I have pulled out the anxiety from the 
drain…
Do you care if I lose or gain?

Your eyes open…but why do they don’t 
gaze at me
A brighter day is approaching me…
Your eyes close…unveil Your love and 
throw it on me
Don’t let things get out of hand…refrain
From making me feel dumb

I have to grab a hold of the healing rain
I’ve decided to listen to music
I have to throw all of my worries into the 
trash bin
I have pulled out the anxiety from the 
drain…
Do you care if I lose or gain?
I have to grab a hold of the healing rain
I’ve decided to listen to music
I have to throw all of my worries into the 
trash can
I have pulled out the anxiety from the 
bottomless well...
Do you care if I have lost my directions?
I feel like I’ve arrived undone 
I’ll just sleep until the sun
Rises from the East…

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