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Below is the poem entitled night which was written by poet Sandra Adams. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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night

the moon rises
her candle-lit glow dances
casting shadows on walls
as she weaves in and out
of night's winded breath
fingering every inch of  darkness
as she thrusts herself forward

night moans
in a climax of screams
then becomes silent
under freshly fallen dew
she tucks herself beneath covers
and awaits morning's blush

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  1. Date: 11/10/2013 6:45:00 AM
    Covers and night...so well comparison .The story inside the story is expressive work by you.Loved it..

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:58:00 PM
    I could see Love in its purest form unfolding in the dimness. :)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/3/2013 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Jake :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:17:00 PM
    This is very sexy! Love it!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Richard...not sure where this one came from or where my muse was going with it... hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:44:00 PM
    well written Sandra....best wishes

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph...hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Very expressive and creative work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading your unique creation today..Your visit to my page was uplifting.Sara

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Sara...this one came out of nowhere :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:16:00 AM
    I had to come back and fave THIS one. Just hurry and put them all in a book for me!!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea....a book is my next goal in life.... hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:05:00 AM
    This is extremely awesome my dear friend Sandra. Absolutely, you're also a great poet indeed. Kudos on this great work of yours my very dear friend and Libramate! Thank you so much for sharing & belated thanks for your nice comments on my poem. More importantly too is..Advance happy happy birthday as well! Wishing u all the best! Thanks for informing me & I've already included your name in the librans' b-day balloons. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for your kind words Leonora and the visit to my poem ...hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 4:33:00 PM
    OH MY GOSH, this is brilliant. You have to keep writing EVERY day, Sandy. I never know what you will come up with but i am sure to love it. soupmail. I did something SO STUPID

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you dear friend...I wish my muse would feel like writing every day....your words are always so kind....hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Oh lordy, my heart is pounding, and may the morning never come!...Another gem from you as usual...

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tim for your visit and kind comment :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 12:25:00 AM
    Wow, awesome!!! Sandra, you true poet, if only night could read this, she would never allow day-break! this goes to my fav.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/8/2013 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Bindu... night can be beautiful at times :) hugs