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Dallying

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Dallying

How your beauteous face stirs me
as I gaze into your startling eyes
deep blue pools of mystery I see
you hold me bound by satin ties

Your hair shines like ravens wings
a riotous windswept mass of curls
as I gaze up on you my heart sings
seeming to turn in spins and whirls

Your figure so perfectly curved
I just yearn to be in your arms
your piecing gaze has me unnerved
and yet I am pulled by your charms

Dallying together, passions rising
soon we will be wed as man and wife 
for now we just play, do some musing
of emotions which do now run so rife


written for National Poetry Day
10/03/2013

I tried to leave which sex to the readers imagination


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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Passsionate work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Sara Ty for your nice review Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 8:32:00 PM
    Lovely work my dear Shadow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dearest M.M ty my friend appreciated love Shadow xox smile
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:25:00 PM
    Ha ha, good for you. This was a very sexy piece.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Richard sorry for slow reply (had no internet) glad you liked it ty for reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:52:00 PM
    Hmmm, you are teasing us. by saying "for now we just play" I can interpret that one of two ways!!! I like what Carrie said, Stirring the sex pot!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea I must have been too close to it lol I did not intend to tease but I see what you mean now. Ty for reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 2:01:00 PM
    The perfect title.........dallying is to tease.....flirt and stir the sex pot !! Yes!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol Ty Carrie for your lovely review Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Hi! my friend, just few minutes before I was thinking like it and am surprised that you have beautifully written the same. Miracle, it is. I think it's a kind of corruption of blackmailing love. Excellently done. I can,t do as you can. Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi BL nice to see you Ty for your review life is strange lol Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:00:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem, Shadow !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/10/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Anne Lise much appreciated Shadow x smile