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The Verdict Is In

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The Verdict Is In

Troubled Times of Turmoil
Coming back around again
Curses; always foiled!
My agonized and worried Brain!

Like an Army of Needles-
Poking; prodding!
As Agents of Evil,
Laughing; applauding!

Stabbing every inch of me-
Tear my flesh; scar my Soul
Cannot run; cannot flee!
Leave me raw; leave me exposed!

Find me G-U-I-L-T-Y
Mind is F-I-L-T-H-Y
Kill me Q-U-I-C-K-L-Y

*Another old experimental piece I found

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Chan GEESH !!!! What is with the dark and creepy poem. You are scaring me. LOL Nice job Thanks for the insightful comment on my Love Drives Me Insane poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 11/3/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is quite dark and creepy, I agree lol Thanks for the read, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 12:27:00 PM
    I like this poem in that it is very L-O-U-D! What a creative mind!..JM

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    Date: 10/4/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Joseph; it's a definite departure from my usual style. I appreciate the read and reply, always :)