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A Season's Dance

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A Season's Dance

Stretching long, without goodbye Weary from the summer's play The rolling hills are losing green But laughing to a cloud flecked sky while catching autumn's leaves ~ Autumn days show quiet grace A fading trace of yesterday... We watch a sky yield a change of hue Turning gray from shades of blue But there is now a harvest moon Dancing to a different tune For, winter's coming soon ~ After trees have lost their hue Let the wind bring seasons new I'll smile upon the pillowed earth that brings a sense of peace instead.... A winter spread of snowy mounds A softer sound upon the ground as snowflakes waltz around ~ Until the birds return again, I'll watch the dance of green begin I'll brush the blossoms off my head then,... dance because it's spring !
______________________________________________________________ For Gail's Contest: "A Season's Dance"10/1/12

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 7:10:00 PM

    You beautifully captured the essence of the seasons in this poem. I loved how they progressed from one verse to the next. And, they dance together perfectly! Wonderful poetry, Carrie! I wish you the best of luck. This should place high in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments!

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 12:19:00 AM

    Carrie this is brilliant....Seren

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:40:00 PM

    And then lets rake them all in a big pile and jump in it, roll around and throw leaves on each other, throw a few logs on and have a weeny roast!...'I'll smile upon the pillowed earth?' How the heck did you come up with THAT? You never cease to amaze...

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:25:00 PM

    Ahh..This beauty fills me with serenity and shows me that no matter month or season to live life and dance like those gold leaves is a wonderful reason.I feel you happy in this verse sweer lady and tnks for your too kind comment.You are the beauty of the soup not me dear..big hug

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:42:00 AM

    Sigh. This was gorgeous. Your craft is so consistent. "Stretching long, without goodbye"...I'd love to feel that one day. No more goodbyes...just hellos.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 8:31:00 AM

    Fantastic imageries to create a picture of seasons, carrie