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Allow me to advise to those that listen, on 
who you give your heart to. A part true, I 
had and have scared few. None of this 
part new, but there's something I have to 
tell you. 1st know your limit, for hearts 
weak and timid get bold when love is in it. 
2nd know how far to take it, for giving one 
your all will leave you vacant. 3rd think 
sensibly, believe half of what you hear and 
all of what you see. For love is a tough act, 
people don't always speak what they 
appear to be. And yes, your heart is as 
easy as 1-2-3. As steady as it beats, keep 
that pace steady in your feet. Know your 
heart is like anything, it is what you eat. If 
you feed it hate, that's what it will create. 
Just saying, be careful what you put on 
your hearts plate. Also there's something 
you shouldn't have to learn, a heart's 
precious. Shouldn't be given away, it's 
something someone has to earn. Believe 
me, for don't we all think less of things 
given free? Lastly, realize your heart is 
fragile. Over time it gets weak. All I ask if 
you give it to someone, keep the receipt




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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:54:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup, Rommell ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Rommell ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:59:00 PM

    Hi Rommell, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT