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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:19:00 AM

    Powerful - I love the way your confidence grows. The beauty of confidence is that it motivates others to shrive and reach for but a taste of what you posses. :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 11/1/2013 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well it took it long enough! lol Thank you Greg; sometimes I like to be a little cocky in my writings :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 11:18:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this delightful verse....hope you continue writing more works like this! Best wishes with your poetry endeavors! Julie :-)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/25/2013 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Julie! Watching my girls grow into the beautiful women they are becoming has definitely served as an inspiration so I probably will be ;)
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 2:19:00 AM

    "For words that grasp the soul" tis the heart of this beautiful piece...well done my new friend

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/24/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sarai thank you; I'm glad you liked it, I still really enjoyed your poem yesterday.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:59:00 AM

    Good one dear,its a marvel. Kudos, Love and hugs.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/23/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you liked it; thank you for giving me your time. Take care Ifeanyi.
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:42:00 AM

    a delightfully beautiful piece

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/7/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Liam; you're always taking the time to support another poet :)
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 7:00:00 PM

    After reading your poem the word temptress came to mind. I like the confidence and passion that is depicted through your words. Well done

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/4/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you PJ; I was hoping some would would pull those characteristics from this writing.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:10:00 PM

    Clever poem FJ, Too clever for me lol, pleased you put the explanation on, . Take care, Richard

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/3/2013 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol Richard. Just elaborating on the strength of a woman's ability to captivate a person's imagination or emotion with mere words. I am focussing on women because my experience thus far in reading poetry and in life has shown this strength to lay with many women. Of course this is my perspective but this is how I wanted to express it.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 9:19:00 AM

    Hi, F.J. ! Nice to meet you! I highly enjoyed the setting you placed here. I hope you can expand on her impact in the world you created more with, perhaps, new writings on it? The struggles you placed on this "Poetress" can be very relatable to many of us here. Great job! :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/2/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Drake; I hope so too. I appreciate you taking time to read it, it's not often I get to write anymore but I'm hoping to pick back up again.