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Below is the poem entitled Dream which was written by poet Thomas Lin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Dream

My life passes me by day by day
Hoping that one day it could change
Then I soon glance at something with such beauty
It was an angel in which I seek

The look in such eyes soon makes me realize
Just how wonderful life could be
When one day you are holding hands with me 
At night when you feel the cold air breeze
I will hold you in my arms so peacefully 

The warmth of a goddess in the one I love
Makes me feel like I am soaring in the skies above 
Glancing at those soft tender lips
Closing in closer so we can share such a passionate kiss

I could wish for nothing more
Your presence is all that I was searching for
Such an image could not be
For me to soon realize that it was just a dream
When I awake I will finally know
How life would be in the real world
Will time come and pass me by
Will I ever be able to find true love before I die
Soon I realize that I am standing under the wedding bells
Where my angel and I are exchanging our sacred vows.

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  1. Date: 1/18/2014 12:57:00 AM
    A Poetic Master piece nuff said.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Thomas, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Thomas, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:14:00 AM
    Thomas, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT <3

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 9:07:00 PM
    straight from the heart, Thomas ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:03:00 PM
    Thomas, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

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    Date: 10/1/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the support. I tried to send you a message, hope you got it. definitely be friends
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:46:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Thomas ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)