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YET, WHEN YOU'RE HERE

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YET, WHEN YOU'RE HERE


We spend the hours in tinge of pale There's nothing just quite right And neutral colors that prevail Grow dimmer come moonlight, Until you’re here the pastel hues Explode across those distant coos Yet when you’re here Yet when you’re here I feel the reds of sky diffuse. Shall we spend hours in tinge of pale Come, love, let us request The tiny stars to dance love’s sway Above the moonlit crest. Your pleasing lips and warm embrace Enchant a thrill flaming our space Oh, pleasing lips Oh, pleasing lips Dare me to fall into your chase. Another Song Lyric Contest Sponsor: Anne Currin by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Such a romantic poem that has a beautiful flow, nette! Grabe sobrang bagal ng internet ko & computer-- thanks so much, my mom's still on the road to recovery, pls continue praying for her, thanks---- but we are optimistic-- btw-- stay safe-- ingat ka ha!! Let's pray for our kababayans, esp those in Samar & Leyte-- grabe si Yolanda-- hopefully lumihis! Congrats on all your wins! hugs and prayers sent your way!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Love in wave of love, beautifully done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:44:00 PM
    This is quite the special lyrical write my friend! I was completely engrossed within your poem as I was reading it! You kept me in awe by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a tremendous lyric, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Such a romantic love song! I'm so happy to be back reading your beautiful poetry. You're poetry has always inspired me...love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:00:00 PM
    extremely beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Lyrics to be sung by slow guitar..Reads like a winner to me..One of your better works in my opinion..Thanks for the visit to my unfinished work..I've got another one started, unfinished and not posted..I've got wild thoughts running through my head..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 11:24:00 AM
    - Ohhh .... so romantic that it's almost a little sad ..... (hope you understand what I mean). - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Lyric and lovely poem nette. Very pretty! G.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:12:00 AM
    How could love, dear Nette, not respond to such an exquisite romantic call? Masterfully expressed! Hugs!