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A Shining Star

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Inspiration came from a Contest ," Who am I, by Dan K. ? "  I must say ..I write freely , yet when I enter a contest a surge of inspiration comes my way .
This was for a poet here  Dan , well deserved ~


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A Shining Star


            you are one that makes me smile
                you seem to have that Chicago style ~

            you a Man with music in his heart
                 being born an Artist at the start~

            Am I sure you know whom you are ?
              In this World people can bring you down
                Or they can make you feel a Star ~

           You a Poet , you a friend , a Music Man 
              If you have forgotten then I wish to remind ~

            Dan Our Poet very loving I find
              Never a doubt a Gentleman in my mind ~

             For Dan ' Da Bears Man ' 
                If you have ever forgotten ..
                well let me remind,  of one so kind ~
        
           A shining Star you are ..Shanity Rain

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:28:00 PM
    lovely..... Love ~SKAT~

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 11/7/2013 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Skat!
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Way to go ..Congrats on your win..Sara

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/31/2013 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sara , you never miss a chance to congratulate others on their wins !! I think that tells me quite a lot about your beautiful spirit ..love , Shanity rain
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:01:00 PM
    Dan , Da bears man ..I just noticed a typo ! Thanks for giving me the honor of a win ..I am fixing it now .. all the poets win to me .

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Very nicely written with the personal touches. Congrats on your win :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/31/2013 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Karen , I hope , you will write something for my 1st contest "American Indian People " in your work I have been able to read, you have that flavor ! Of course if you do , do not put name at the bottom , for my goal is to choose equal to all, you have this wonderful presence about you !
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM
    lovely write for the contest...congrats on your win :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/31/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sandra , I love the time you take to encourage all with your beautiful comments . Beauty is gifted inside and out ~
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Beautiful poem..and tribute..congratulations

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/30/2013 3:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Donna ~ I love that picture !
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:18:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in the contest of Dan, Shanity

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/30/2013 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Dr. I have noticed you taking ..I thought 1st place and wanted to read and always congratulate you my inspiration ! I feel awful for I can not always do that , trying to keep a roof over head ~ Thinking of my Fav DR !
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:07:00 PM
    congratulations Shanity, have a nice day...LINDA

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/30/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my sweet friend Linda , again , I have wanted to read your poems to , I have not been able to . I know you are really worthy of being number 1 in many a contest , I have seen you !! Congratulation's my super star!
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Yvette---An excellent tribute to a special friend and many congrats on your win in the contest! Much deserved indeed, Julie :-)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Julie ! It is wonderful to honor the poets' here !
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:42:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in Dan Kearley contest - Nice to read your words about a common friend, Shanity. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sweet Anne Lise ! You are number 1 on that one ..Great job ! You are deserving of this and more ~