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Within

Within the mind a woven tapestry
Of joy, a pink cotton candy sunset
A memory of sunsets fancy free
Can't duplicate, nor memory forget

Come go into a pink sunset with me
Each day let it be blessed gift received
A memory shared as long as life we see
Enjoy each sunset and cherish with greed

Slowly walk into the cotton candy sunset
Spend its minutes together close as can be
Unraveling past mistakes _all forget
Forward_ filled with peace for eternity

Within the woven tapestry pattern
Let beauty in the end only pattern discern  

Finis'

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 6:18:00 PM
    stopping by this one again... was hoping it was completed by now... you left it with interesting imagery...Linda

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:37:00 PM
    sounds good enough to eat. I think that is why we call it eye candy!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Sara please do tell when this one is complete.... I know it's gonna be good... You got pink cotton candy sunset... haha..that's one of the best imagery's ever... love..Linda

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 11:08:00 AM
    Very interesting thought you penned here wonderfully, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 4:53:00 PM
    Looking forward to reading the finished sonnet, you've started it off magnificently, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:14:00 AM
    i'm getting high already, sara.. will get back to this when done... simply tremendous!..:) huggs