Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

railroaded

liam mcdaid Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled railroaded which was written by poet liam mcdaid. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by liam mcdaid

Best Liam Mcdaid Poems

+ Fav Poet

railroaded

Is that the sound of a train whistling
Or, the sound of my heart a pumping

As I espy you waiting on the platform
I wonder if you’re the vision of reform

En route to San Diego and looking fine   
Rolling in motion on track twenty nine

Railroaded with me, our steamy desires   
Threaten to drag this trolley through fire

Are you real?  Can I touch? Just one hug    
While the train steams away chug a chug
 
Let’s make love, while we rock the caboose 
Two hearts, one great start, oh great Zeus!

We’ve arrived in great shape, so let us stay 
Together molded as the potter and his clay

liam and mystic

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Congrats to Liam and Mystic for such an awesome poem; wanted to keep reading and reading and reading......the flow was spot on! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:42:00 AM

    Super like! oh Zeus, are you real:) you write the most amazing poems, Liam:)

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:58:00 PM

    A beautiful poem with a beautiful ending. thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 1:39:00 PM

    :)

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 1:07:00 PM

    ohhh, i like how this just floats with such lovey-dovey feel, liam... you and mystic simply mesh!... right on!..;) huggs