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ASYLUM ADMISSION

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Below is the poem entitled ASYLUM ADMISSION which was written by poet Kim van Breda. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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ASYLUM ADMISSION


control was the crucial key evading limits of sanity resolutely focused on normality determined to linger unwaveringly vague lines of uncertainty that gradually blur inevitably as reason loses clarity boundary crossed perplexedly control was the crucial key © September 2013—Kim van Breda

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  1. Date: 10/22/2013 2:04:00 PM
    I like this poem. It reflects the person's state of mind well.

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mike-- an honest reflection.
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 10:29:00 PM
    well penned Kim.....best wishes

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:13:00 AM
    It's a great poem penned from the deepest feeling and you have shown excellently how the unseen qualities of mind can be controlled with the key of consciousness. A nice creation of inner thoughts. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:16:00 PM
    well done Kim. I like how you start and end on the same line. Feels like a never ending circle. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 1:02:00 PM
    thought-provoking with lines that captures the borderline between being sane and not... i once wrote a one-liner in high-school that went: " to be sane is to have moments of sanity.."... greeat stuff!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 10:23:00 AM
    This is a very powerful write Kim, one I so understand, you delivered it with grace and beauty, love to you always, xxx

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Very well done. Bravo!

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Yes! I love this. One of your stronger writings yet. Such a battle of self & sanity in your lines. Awesome job!

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 9/30/2013 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake You are always one of the first to comment on my scribbling's and I love you for that-- and of course your ongoing encouragement.