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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 4:13:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Craig, :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT ~

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win free verse is a favorite form of mine and what a sweet picture you painted for us! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:40:00 PM
    So much to enjoy and imagine with a sister's collage. Wonderful last line! Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:29:00 PM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Craig

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Craig, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 9:27:00 AM
    What an endearing poem.....it makes me think of the times I have run across keepsake pictures, discovered feelings by what was kept, treasured .....unsaid words are often captured in subtle ways. A lovely poem, Craig....and that last line.......oh my......it makes me think of my brother and I..... we always loved/liked each other.....but as kids....we would never have admitted such a thing! :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Craig....This is a perfect example for us to work with....Very well worded..Nostalgia sets in...That last line? WOW! Saying simply something so profound! Wonderful. Loved the line full of alliteration...wonderful touch! BTW...that is SOME AVATAR!!!! WOW!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:18:00 PM
    this is very touching and i especially liked the ending. one thing i have to correct, though - as a former beatlemaniac, i urge you to please fix the spelling of beatles!

    Cornish Avatar Craig Cornish
    Date: 9/28/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Done !!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you!
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Craig, you got the Collage, right on my Star poem and light show:-)... glad you noticed it.. Craig, this one's a nice sweet touching memory.. sometimes things might hit us when we least expect ... I like your sisters collage... a sweet display of all the things she loved and all the people she admired and looked up to... You must had been some inspiration then TOO.... lovely lovely.. ta ta till later..LINDA