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Vampire

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Vampire

Cold, dark breeze
covering a quiet meadow and
Running with the trees,
like an excited vampire
that ignores sunlight
amidst the buzzing of bees.

c2013 Julie Rasley

Contest: Poem of Compression contest, 9/28/13

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:07:00 PM

    Hmm... Right now, on this very moment I am planning to become an excited vampire and run amidst the buzzing of bees. Cute little one and I invite you to enter my new contest that I posted today, SAT., 10-26-2013. :) G.

    Rasley Avatar Julie Rasley Date: 10/25/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Giorgio---Thanks so much for your kin remarks and unique reflection on this piece! Have a great weekend and I will take a look at your contest...thanks for inviting me! Julie :-)
  1. Date: 10/12/2013 2:24:00 AM

    I love this poem, simple with wonderful warm imagery =)

    Rasley Avatar Julie Rasley Date: 10/12/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thx again Thomas and hope you enjoy your weekend! Julie :-)
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Julie, I'm expecting a little bite..LOL...love this one... good luck in the contest...Linda

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Great imagery, you have compressed and squeezed the best out of it, good luck in the contest Julie xxx

    Rasley Avatar Julie Rasley Date: 9/28/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mystic Rose---Thanks and good luck with your poetry! Julie :-)