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Tanka 8

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Tanka 8

	
	
	
	Tanka 8
	
	
	your dark eyes... your lips 
	are just barely visible
	despite the darkness
	as veiled as they are exposed
	tender... and perhaps wounded
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:46:00 PM
    Wow...The whole tanka is a stunner, but the last line is absolutely LOADED! I'm speechless...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/3/2013 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tim, thank you for the compliment. I really appreciate it... Jack
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 12:33:00 AM
    lovey tanka Jack...I really like this one...

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:19:00 PM
    deep write full of feelings Jack well written Shadow x smile

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/28/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Shadow, for the nice comment... Jack
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:12:00 AM
    oh my, you floored me , jack... sensitive piece so lovely!..:) huggs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/28/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Nette. I always respect your opinion... Jack
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 8:55:00 AM
    wow, this is gorgeous, Jack!!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/28/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea. That's a very nice compliment... Jack
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 4:45:00 AM
    Nice theme, Jack

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/28/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. I appreciate the comment... Jack