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9-76 A PRESENT VIEW

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these 4 were done at a sitting overlooking a valley from early afternoon untill evening


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9-76 A PRESENT VIEW

Crawling cars on concrete streams
Fed by asphalt brooks,
What does progress really mean
And how does it really look ?
                               ------
Bands unexpectedly form fan shaped orange-red,
    rayed from point to point
       To stand out
            Send out,
And feed my dreams in bed.
                                -------
A sunset orange pool
    beneath a colored cloud
Tells a meaning to it all
Bespeaks it quite out loud
Then changing red
     Much more is said
An orb relates it all
                                  ------
Some clouds came out
Beneath the cover
And stood as dense as stone,
Behind a veil of captured light
       Illuminations shown

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