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Complete

You make me feel so complete	 
You brought me up to my feet	 
You make me experience cloud seven 	
You brought me to your heaven 

The worst part of my life is over…at last…
There are no more fights in my brain
I’m experiencing cloud 7 and I reach to heaven
Then notice it was all in my imagination…
I’ve changed…
You’ve gone away…but yet I still love you forevermore
My wings soar…when you were around…
Left without a trace…a single sound…

Your words implant seeds of growth
Your eyes, an undying oath
You quench me with serpentine poetry  
You gave in to gravity 

The worst part of my life is over…at last…
There are no more fights in my brain
I’m experiencing cloud 7 and I reach to heaven
Then notice it was all in my imagination…
I’ve changed…
You’ve gone away…but yet I still love you forevermore
My wings soar…when you were around…
Left without a trace…a single sound…

You melted my heart of ice 
I’m your living sacrifice 
You watched over me with glistening eyes  
Your warmth never screams goodbyes   

The worst part of my life is over…at last…
There are no more fights in my brain
I’m experiencing cloud 7 and I reach to heaven
Then notice it was all in my imagination…
I’ve changed…
You’ve gone away…but yet I still love you forevermore
My wings soar…when you were around…
Left without a trace…face down to the ground…

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