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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:32:00 PM

    Want you to know how much I enjoyed this...and how you put your children ahead of your own needs....a true lady....wonderful write

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/25/2013 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Donna; many of us do this every day.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 10:37:00 AM

    The ending of this... wow! Amazing poem F.J!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/2/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you liked it Kristy; I was looking for something a little different.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 9:20:00 AM

    I always embrace a strong ending. You certainly did that here. Those last 2 lines are fine example of reality crashing down. Nicely done!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/2/2013 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again Drake; that I wanted the title to be a little misleading :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 2:36:00 AM

    Voila an aweinspiring poem on us d weaker sex! Kudos 4 d expression and u end it with an impresive jilting effect!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 10/1/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for such kind words S; I have a couple of friends currently here and they need to know a person who feels weak does not have to remain that way. Especially if they have friends who will help them be strong through encouragement, not bashing.
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Very nice... Terry

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 9/30/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking time to read it Terry :)
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 6:52:00 PM

    penned sweet and very beautiful piece

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 9/30/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you again for your kind words Liam.
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 10:59:00 AM

    truly a deep poem, with good meaning... enjoyed...LINDA

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 9/30/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda; with all the poems you read I appreciate you taking time to read mine.
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 11:38:00 PM

    Hi. I wanted to see your poetry to know what you like for a feeling poem. This is expresses deep feeling. Do you have specific ones that you would suggest as your best examples for us?

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 9/30/2013 6:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Andrea, Journey to Forgiveness is one I like b/c it tells a story people do not usually get until they get to the end. And Final Moment b/c to many it is befitting mourning of loss of life though for others it signifies loss of love.
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:20:00 PM

    Nicely done

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 9/30/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)