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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 9:15:00 AM
    The last two lines are a perfect conclusion.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:13:00 PM
    nice win... Debbie, , congrats......... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:21:00 AM
    congrats on this wonderful piece, well deserved win!!!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:02:00 PM
    To grasp life without letting the past memories of someone dear get a hold on us.Ow yes life is too short to grief someone whose just a shadow of what was.Heartfelt and deep msg.Xongrat.dearDeborah.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:44:00 PM
    congrads on your excelent poem

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Debbie

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:14:00 AM
    An excellent write Debbie well done Robert (RabCD)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:23:00 PM
    I love the message within this magnificent poem you penned...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:11:00 PM
    A very comforting poem Debbie congrats xxx

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Congratulations debbie love xx

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Me likes this, truly worthy of the Guzzi brand!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Hey Debs! This ends with a bright and cheerful note..."grasp life without the tearful storms.". I don't think that I've 'tearful storms', though. More like ones that rage with fury. Still it's a sunny, cloudless day.:) I think that one day I'll give the "hybonnet" a whirl! Keep well, Mikki

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:22:00 PM
    awesome philosophy, Debs. I had no idea there was a form called hybronnet among the choices here!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:35:00 PM
    There is a lesson to learn between the lines of this poem......we often spend our days mourning someone/something futilely in expense of what is good and whole that might lie right here before our eyes. (Another new form I will have to try sometime)...great piece!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:29:00 PM
    Great write, well worth reading, thank you for sharing....Peter