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sleeping beauty

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sleeping beauty

as you breathe
falling then rising
your chest
like counting 
heartbeats
sleeping with you

a very 
beautiful dream
one joy
in beholding
each breath
a whisper

a moment
in time
staring upon you
each sleeping movement
falling in grace
that of a thousand swans
a royal beauty

i dream 
in softest petals
breathtakingly beautiful
feelings cotton soft
stored in one's mind
awake with you
my darling
as you 
sleep











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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Liam----Wonderful poem and great comparison using swans.....Great job....Julie :-)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:53:00 AM
    Dreamy and serene flow with the swans ..Lovely

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:27:00 PM
    i'm drawn to this; so vulnerable and divine,liam.. :) huggs