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A Girl Called Fate

He never had the luck
nor the down of an evanescent duck,
in this world where the dice is thrown
just another gamble which side of the track.
In his mission statement, he declares
is my love wasted?
A love never returned
yet oh so tired of giving,
in this his life down half way lane
where constantly with love he finds a “Cul de Sac”
his groundhog day,
oh where the embarrassment is just too much.
So life you’re a b*t*h
casting each day unjust spells this condescending witch,
on the net he tried oh God for years, tried
to workout the plot
but i’m no porno star, he says
well hung i am, not.
So to you, my fair lady, keep your glow on
I’m looking forward to this our first date,
although history reveals, i’ll come across like a fly in your soup
restricted there, where i cannot swim,
hoping it will not be a disaster,
just, another plunge into love     
what is your name, i declare my ignorance
Fate she says, and i am aware of your plight
there is some one for every one
i am here to guide your way into love!

© Harry J Horsman 2013    

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Well written Harry, I hope that fate . has many good things waiting for you. I enjoyed this poem very much....peter

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Rather enjoyed this one a lot!!!!! Hope lady luck is smiling for you....

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 5:50:00 PM
    As if fate is something he can hold in his hand.....either toss it, or keep it......you have made it real !

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 2:20:00 PM
    At one time in our lives we all meet with fate. I hope your fate has a happy ending...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:10:00 PM
    Wish you the best, Harry! You are a great heart and a great poet! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 4:03:00 AM
    - There are many such destinies out into the world .... - Always give of themselves but never get something back .... A fantastic well written poem dear Harry .... a little touching but real ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:06:00 AM
    Just came here again to say hello, Harry, and hope you are well.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 11:02:00 PM
    Wow Harry! This is the first free verse in a while... Very nice. If this is a true story in your life. May your love find her way. :o)

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 6:26:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed your poem. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Her name is fate, certainly she will be lucky if she is with you. You have beautifully given your message here. Loved your style my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 8:21:00 AM
    this reminded me of a poem I wrote a while ago about fate. So I posted it. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 8:01:00 AM
    enjoyed your poem harry. let us know how it goes with fate. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:23:00 AM
    Fantastic work, loved it!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Of this poem I like the last part, very effective, less the first part. You can do much better, Harry! Don't be worried, I try to comment frankly what I read and, believe me, you are one of my favorites

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 5:09:00 AM
    Very lovely and appealing personification, harry

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 2:17:00 AM
    this is a natural, harry... love the way you personified fate like it were not part of a world molded somehow by science... awesome!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Harry, you are so COOL. I love this personification of the lady known as Fate. And hoping her name be Lady luck!!!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:13:00 PM
    Hi Harry, A poignant write for sure..Nicely penned..Thanks for stopping by my work.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Hiya, my middle name is fate will i do lol xx

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:21:00 AM
    really enjoyed this write Harry superb Shadow x smile

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