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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:29:00 AM
    Perfection indeed…Enjoyed reading your creativity..Sara

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    Date: 9/26/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara for your kind comment. It’s nice of you./My muse is fast asleep these days. I can’t invent/Such a fine tale. As Eileen just said it’s not new./I’ve versified it—and changed it to some extent.
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:53:00 PM
    Love how you took this and formed it into such an exquisite poem... My dad used to tell this story to others about where he is in life right now. I can relate well to this...Great write....Hope all is well....

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    Date: 9/26/2013 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dearest sister, how glad I am we have you here./I received it in an email my sister sent/In Persian prose I think about this time last year./May your dad live long and still share his divine scent.