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Suicide

Tear filled eyes
Heart wrenching pain
Grief and sorrow fill my world

A goodbye never said
A note never left
Cries of anguish you’ll never hear

But for a chance to hold you
To give you warmth
To melt your cold, cold world
To try to understand your pain.

I HATE you for leaving me
I am so Angry at your selfishness
I sob every day
Every moment
For You

I miss you so much it burns
My memories of you flooding in
Are clouded by sorrow.
My colourful world now only grey.

I want you to hear my cries
I Need you to know
That you’re missed
Forever and always
I will love you


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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:06:00 AM

    This hits even closer to home the second time. I have a friend who's 28 year old son just committed suicide. She is now going through the anger stage.

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 11/23/2013 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    that is tragic Richard. It is hard to understand and hard to deal with. My prayers are with you and your friend.
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:17:00 PM

    suicide is bad and sad, had a friend who did that. Me and him lost our tempers and never talked again. In my heart he will always bee a good friend. I forgive with my heart

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:01:00 AM

    Beautiful poem of heart beating and filled up with deep emotions. Excellent expression,my friend, you have done nicely. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:31:00 PM

    Is this fiction or t a real thing which happened - I think it is a touching poem. Best Matthew Anish

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 10/12/2013 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    when I was many years younger I lost 2 friends years apart to suicide. I wrote this on the emotions I felt. Thank you for stopping by Matthew
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 3:12:00 AM

    I can identify, and I feel with you. I welcome you to find companionship in mine titled My Husband Your Bride. Well done my poetry friend. Well done! Sarai

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:58:00 PM

    Thom, this is very deep and emotional. You make the readers heart break with these words. Suicide is very tragic and happens more than it should. Nice job my friend

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 10/4/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it does sadly. I have felt this pain twice in my life and it is heart wrenching. Thank you for taking the time to drop by Robin =)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:28:00 PM

    an intense poem that shows the different emotions this kind of tragedy produces in the ones abandoned!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 10/2/2013 1:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you as always Andrea =)
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:12:00 PM

    A very deeply emotional poem, Thomas. I can relate to this. I had thoughts of suicide when I was a teenager, but then again, what teenager doesn't? Thankfully, I never actually attempted it...This is a tough subject to write about, well done!...Thank you very much for the kind comments!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 10/2/2013 1:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for dropping by Kelly =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:38:00 PM

    A tough read but well written, my friend! Kudos

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your kind words. =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:10:00 PM

    I am very happy you paid me a visit for you brought me to your writing , this I well written , Heart felt, makes me want too send a hug your way ~ Yvette

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by, it is very much appreciated. =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM

    What heartache you shed in this powerful and heartcracking poem! I shed a tear, and I feel your pain, i truely do!!! What a poem, it is very sad, but suicide is never an answer, it just makes everything worse and a selfish way too go! I know! THomas a truely deep hearted write you here! :) My thoughts and prayers go out to you. Also thank you for reading my Haiku. I shall be back for more Thomas! Great write Thomas! :) Have a great day!

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 10:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by my page =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:57:00 AM

    There is nothing to compare to this kind of heartache, ......I know it first-hand, the devastation such a loss leaves behind guilt, remorse, questions, of asking ourselves "what could I have done?"....dreaming of changing the outcome, yet knowing the futility of wishing it could be 'yesterday'.....so that something could turn the future. I'm so sorry if this has happened in your own life. Healing does not come easily.

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for your kind words. Yes healing takes time. =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:52:00 AM

    - A cry for help or love ..... very serious topic! - Well written, Thomas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 7:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    takk AL I appreciate you stopping by, always =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Words etched with pain, oh but the sweet reunion, how shall it be, when we all go meet our maker, just soul to soul, light to light we will all be one light, love to you dear one, chin up and keep your knight armor, loosed chinked, peace bro xxx

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you MR =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:26:00 AM

    So hard to understand the pain a person must have to take their life. Life really can be beautiful. This is a heart wrenching poem written with love and pain. Well done. Betty

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by Betty =)
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:04:00 AM

    heartfelt subject beautifully penned

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/26/2013 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Liam =)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:11:00 AM

    A very difficult topic expressed with eloquence and sensitivity.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/26/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Thomas
    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/25/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by =)
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:41:00 AM

    Im sure yor ex wud find dis heartwarming too, such a nice excellent lyrical poem with lovesick emotions expresd sweetly. Regards n tnx poet.

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/25/2013 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you =)
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:05:00 PM

    this poem does burn. hard to explain the emotions. I know the hard core expression in the I HATE you part. :-(....................... well done...................SKAT

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/25/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by. It is subject that is hard to really talk about softly. Sadly I have lost 2 friends to suicide over the years and I can remember feeling bitter towards their action for awhile. =)
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:17:00 PM

    A nice piece of poetry you have written here, my friend. sad though easy to read. thanks Thomas....peter

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/25/2013 12:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you =)
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:54:00 AM

    very sad and dark ~always pd

    Simunsen Avatar Thomas Simunsen Date: 9/24/2013 9:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for stopping by Linda =)