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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 9:06:00 AM
    This hits even closer to home the second time. I have a friend who's 28 year old son just committed suicide. She is now going through the anger stage.

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:17:00 PM
    suicide is bad and sad, had a friend who did that. Me and him lost our tempers and never talked again. In my heart he will always bee a good friend. I forgive with my heart

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:01:00 AM
    Beautiful poem of heart beating and filled up with deep emotions. Excellent expression,my friend, you have done nicely. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:31:00 PM
    Is this fiction or t a real thing which happened - I think it is a touching poem. Best Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 3:12:00 AM
    I can identify, and I feel with you. I welcome you to find companionship in mine titled My Husband Your Bride. Well done my poetry friend. Well done! Sarai

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Thom, this is very deep and emotional. You make the readers heart break with these words. Suicide is very tragic and happens more than it should. Nice job my friend

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:28:00 PM
    an intense poem that shows the different emotions this kind of tragedy produces in the ones abandoned!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:12:00 PM
    A very deeply emotional poem, Thomas. I can relate to this. I had thoughts of suicide when I was a teenager, but then again, what teenager doesn't? Thankfully, I never actually attempted it...This is a tough subject to write about, well done!...Thank you very much for the kind comments!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:38:00 PM
    A tough read but well written, my friend! Kudos

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:10:00 PM
    I am very happy you paid me a visit for you brought me to your writing , this I well written , Heart felt, makes me want too send a hug your way ~ Yvette

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM
    What heartache you shed in this powerful and heartcracking poem! I shed a tear, and I feel your pain, i truely do!!! What a poem, it is very sad, but suicide is never an answer, it just makes everything worse and a selfish way too go! I know! THomas a truely deep hearted write you here! :) My thoughts and prayers go out to you. Also thank you for reading my Haiku. I shall be back for more Thomas! Great write Thomas! :) Have a great day!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:57:00 AM
    There is nothing to compare to this kind of heartache, ......I know it first-hand, the devastation such a loss leaves behind guilt, remorse, questions, of asking ourselves "what could I have done?"....dreaming of changing the outcome, yet knowing the futility of wishing it could be 'yesterday' that something could turn the future. I'm so sorry if this has happened in your own life. Healing does not come easily.

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:52:00 AM
    - A cry for help or love ..... very serious topic! - Well written, Thomas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:39:00 AM
    Words etched with pain, oh but the sweet reunion, how shall it be, when we all go meet our maker, just soul to soul, light to light we will all be one light, love to you dear one, chin up and keep your knight armor, loosed chinked, peace bro xxx

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:26:00 AM
    So hard to understand the pain a person must have to take their life. Life really can be beautiful. This is a heart wrenching poem written with love and pain. Well done. Betty

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:04:00 AM
    heartfelt subject beautifully penned

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:11:00 AM
    A very difficult topic expressed with eloquence and sensitivity.

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    Date: 9/26/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Thomas
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Im sure yor ex wud find dis heartwarming too, such a nice excellent lyrical poem with lovesick emotions expresd sweetly. Regards n tnx poet.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:05:00 PM
    this poem does burn. hard to explain the emotions. I know the hard core expression in the I HATE you part. :-(....................... well done...................SKAT

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:17:00 PM
    A nice piece of poetry you have written here, my friend. sad though easy to read. thanks Thomas....peter