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A different track

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A different track

on a crowded train
on my way home
the monotonous drone
suddenly tuned in
a different tone
 
its beautiful
its peaceful
its imposing
its composing
the reign
of the slow change
the light of sunset 
in a new range
thousand variations
in intense red
 
the new terrain
I noticed
it’s gentle
yet striking
birth of several protists
 
a chain
of continuing moments
being noticed
I changed
during that very unexpected
but so carefully arranged
flashing movie
of sun-guided eye-winks
each time revealing
another life-changing glimpse

© Ellie Daphne

PS. A very dear friend shared a intimate story with me.... and this Rhyme is a metaphor for what I 'saw' and felt (too)

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