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Moments

Moments upon the loom of time woven
Eternally imprinted 'pon the print
Memories cling, never spent, now frozen
Operate the loom, change design's intent

Reverse the hands of time memories change
Invert the negative read love's design
Everlasting His perfect will's plan 
Slipped, falling into sin man was resigned

Offer life up as a living sacrifice
Follow Him away from sins' tangling lure 
Let love reign over heart, flee avarice
Oarsman of my craft let me in thee moor

Values of this life now become peace, love
Eternally woven threads draw close my Dove

Finis'


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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 10:51:00 AM
    An amazing write, Sara. A profound concept swirling like perfume in poetry. I love it. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:48:00 AM
    This is so rich in expression! Each line is very striking, and you've worked beautifully till the last line and word...I enjoyed this, Sara, love you...

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:30:00 PM
    I love it Sara so glad you finished it expertly penned Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:49:00 PM
    This is one lovey piece of poetry.liked it yesterday, and now with the ending added it is perfect. 'Peace and love' how wonderful the words. would not it be lovely if this was the norm...Thanks sara.....Peter

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 1:12:00 PM
    I really love this poem. It was a pleasure to read.Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:38:00 AM
    you took this to a higher level with such gentle portrayal of love's memories, sara... one for the books; love it!...:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:12:00 AM
    A beautiful Sonnet Sara,,, the ending is just lovely... always ~Linda

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Yes, I do love the way you finished this lovely write my friend! You have accomplished what so few have, a perfect poem! Your words accompany such great emotion, I can picture myself right in the midst of this piece! I also like what you have done with the words you have created by the first letters of each line, "Memories of Love" Beautiful! It fits the poem perfectly! I loved reading this write completely this morning! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:47:00 AM
    Sara I love this and your thoughts here Shadow x smile (do finish it)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:07:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this write my friend! I can't wait to see the finished version! You could have the 4th line of the 3rd stanza end with "endure" you could try something with that last word if you'd like, just a thought that's all! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:26:00 PM
    It's looking good to me, nice write...Peter

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Let love lead the way...

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:45:00 PM
    your comming along.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Looks like its coming together to be a great poem !

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 10:07:00 AM
    i like the way this is unfoldig, sara... shine on and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:38:00 AM
    A poem in the making, it happens sometimes to me too, sara