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left alone

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left alone

           
         
         Now I am left alone with tears ~

         with all shared may sadness cease
         the darkness of loss as fears increase
         your heart wants to hold on for hope
        

          losing the one expected never ready 
           going through acceptance you think
          until time stands still and life does cease 
       
           Now I am left alone with tears ~
            
          every thought now to late to speak
            all you thought you knew you didn't
          when death comes swift no real preparation

         How long will this hurt one can only wonder 
          The tears fall hard , the tears fall alone    
           saying goodbye forever your gone .
               
           
          

          

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 1:33:00 PM
    This reads like a very painful write... Painful words of the soul well written. Love conquers all pain. :o)

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:49:00 PM
    time washes tears and changes them into smiles... languid expressions of the beauty within you, yvette..:) huggs

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 9/24/2013 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , soft words written sweet ~ and true ~ Yvette
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:44:00 AM
    You are not alone dear one,am with you emotionally and in spirit. We all have lost loved ones that's the principles of mother earth. But please do accept my condolence. Love from Bob

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 9/23/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Kind Sir ..that is such a heart felt response , It is so true ..the people around you can actually be your family . Again, Thank-you Bob. Yvette
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:11:00 AM
    DRY THE TEARS OF LOVE MY FRIEND HEARTFELT NEVER SAY GOODBYE UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN BEAUTIFUL PIECE

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 9/23/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Beautiful ,warm thoughts ..Thank-you my Friend Liam , Yvette