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Fog

beneath gray skies
misty morning weeps
as nightide closes eyes 
wisps of smoky clouds lift
in upward spiral
delayed sunrise


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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Sandra, thank you for the nice comment... , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Cool piece; loved the brevity. I've said this a million times, but there is something to be said about poets who can say so much in so few words. Kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:13:00 PM
    soupmail.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Well done, sweet poetess. I'm now wondering how I've missed your portfolio. You write with a most talented pen.... I will return.... Jake

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 12:05:00 PM
    It should do well Sandra, you have painted a beautiful picture.

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Loved the imagery and flow... Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:15:00 PM
    A very beautiful description in this poem. I love the imagery! Fantastic poetry, Sandra!...Thank you for the nice comments, as always! :)

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 2:47:00 AM
    'As nightide closese eyes' - a beautiful turn of phrase. Loved your glimpse of painted perfection. Keep on penning poet.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:41:00 AM
    There is a great significance & commonality to your lines & the way humanity thinks. This is a lot more thought-provoking than in its initial read. Subtlely layered...brilliant.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:38:00 AM
    I love dark mornings, and you couldn't have described them better!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 9:21:00 PM
    WELL DONE. I have been seeing this style all over Soup today and loving it. I better get on the ball!!!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Sandra, thanks for stopping by! This poem...I feel you living in this beautiful write! jimbo

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:01:00 PM
    I love those dark mornings, and I love the way you portrayed them in your poem, well done Sandra....peter

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Fine description of a dark morning. Your words here are very evocative! Peace & Love Matthew Anish