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The Wind

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The Wind

The Wind

It’s a dark night

I hear the whistling 

through the trees

“Pitter patter” the sound of the rain falling

I closed all the windows and all the doors

I can still hear the rustling of the leaves

on the ground

It is Fall my favorite season of all

A chilly windy rainy night in mid-September

The wind sounds like wolves howling or like spirits who make noise at night after dark when the spirit world is closest to this world.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2014 11:25:00 AM

    Wonderful imagery!-"Nicely Penned"!...enjoyed this work very much!//Sinclair

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/30/2014 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Robert.
  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:58:00 PM

    Hi Ayesha, Thanks for your comment on my poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. This was a lovely poem. I love the fall and I was born in September. I'll be back for more! ~ Tranquil Bleu

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes and your welcome. I have like twenty seven poems on the Soup. Check out more of my poems...
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:16:00 AM

    How can i describe this? Ecstatic poetry

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:38:00 PM

    Nice poem, Ayesha. The wind is perfectly described. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/30/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 5:19:00 PM

    The wind can be a truly beautiful thing and you've embellished the wind and evinced its characteristics for all that it is. Excellent work

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim Date: 3/30/2014 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Emanuel. Thanks a lot.