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Broken

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Below is the poem entitled Broken which was written by poet Lake Burton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Broken

I want you to undress you heart,
      And show me how much it hurts
            Show I can show you
How I intend to make it stop.

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Hi Lake, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:27:00 PM

    a real deep poem, Lake -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup,Lake ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)